A girl Soul,
cribbed in womb.
laps of warmth,
wrapped the new born in white cloth.
Jingles on feet,
blended smile all over u can see.
Innocence was behold,
in trait of the toddler.
Mirror were those eyes,
for all elder’s desires.
From the day one
the dream of her marriage was on twine.
She was lucky charm
bearer of divine gleam
she was a fount of happiness
causing flurry of grief by her presence
Her marriage day,
she was made dress up in a queenly way.
Affectionately bought jewels made of rare gems,
was all what made her parent feel all satisfying.
She wore a grin,
was happy ,was sad somewhere in twig.
hard was that goodbye,
yet the love showed, made it facile
Curse you say or karma,
everything given was taken away in a second.
She is now a wretched stone,
Her presence is sole cause for all failures.
She deserves only pity,
her own family convinced her to swallow this recline misty.
even made her wear the complete white,
once was for hygiene now to keep up their custom
What she was for them???
To treat as per their rhythm???
once they said you bought us happiness
again they made her realize she has shipped the cursedness????
Once she was called as fortunate gem
Now called as hapless widow??!!!!
Wow… Gal you have portrayed the actual happening of the society in a very effective way…. Must say, it feels so damn good to follow your blog as you have a very vivid way of thinking, and also portray the society in the way it is… Feeling proud to be a fan follower.. 🙂 🙂
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Thanks learner…means a lot, thanks for appreciation and read 🙂
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Just one word for this poem – Wow…. I mean, a really big WOW!!
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Thanks Vinayak 🙂
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No words dear…Just beautiful.. (y)
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Thanks a lot…. 🙂
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Sissy! U hav picturized the reality very well. And no more comments.
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Thanks Rachitha…..means a lot :)..thanks for the read 🙂
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Ashmiii
Good work… You posted after a long time but you did well…
Cheers
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Thanks Anoop 🙂
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Hello superb website! Does running a blog similar to this require a lot of work?
I have very littloe expertise in programming but I hhad been hoping to start my own blog in the near future.
Anyhow, if you have any ideas or techniques for new blog owners please share.
I understand this is off subject however I simply needed to
ask. Thanks!
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Beautifully described…You epic the new face of modern women…Feeling so proud…:) Keep going…(y)
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Hi Prachi,
Am very grateful for visiting my blog and read. Appreciation much conveyed ….Bowing to your sense!!!
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Its atmost my pleasure dear…:)
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Truth you say profound…!!!
but beautifully blanketed by your words..!!!
Touched me indeed..!!!
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Hmmm..am glad you liked this piece of work :)..Thanks for the read Samjoth 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂 ..
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Very sad…
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Yeah 🙂
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